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due Friday 9 September Vocabulary 1. Again, these are due at the




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HOMEWORK: Due tomorrow. You are to registered on the blog as a follower by tomorrow anyway. Please post under comments a response to the poem we are looking at in class: Choose a color and list 10 things with which you make an association. Be prepared to defend these either literally or symbolically (as metaphors or similes orally in class tomorrow. Make sure to identify yourself, so that I can give you credit.





In class today. The following poem is from a collection of contemporary Black British Poetry edited by Kwame Dawes.
As we read this in class, note how are images are organized within the stanzas. You will be asked to write a short response to this.





Infinity of Red by Shanta Acharya

Lips blushing cheeks
colour of magic
hennaed hands and feet
desire blazing like autumnal leaves

Fields of poppies bouquet of roses
flowers of the gulmohur tree flame of the forest
red hibiscus fuchsia peonies
pomegranate seeds scattering like rubies

Red button in the Mandarin’s cap
ruby coral garnet rose quartz cornelian
red cap revolutionist bohemian
red tincture philosopher’s stone
Judas’ red hair Beefeater man

Red Cross for neutrality
blood banks children dying of AIDS/ HIV
red in heraldry fortitude & magnanimity
red light red flag danger signal
red light district brothel
caught red handed red faced like a monkey

Shades of red in earth sky sunrise sunset
cherries carrots tomatoes beetroot
red-blooded man anaemic woman
low haemoglobin iron menses
red rags red capes bullfights
flags of countries in the red bound in red tape
red box of the Chancellor of the Exchequer

Mary in maroon-red and blue The Annunciation
Marilyn Monroe’s red dress in Niagara
Julia Roberts Pretty Woman red Ferraris
Benarasi silk saris Indian weddings
vermillion on the bride’s forhead
red bangles sankha* blood on the sheets red letter day (*a shell bracelet or necklace made in India from the chank shell)
love letters written in blood bruises wounds




Darryl Ciccaglione
Color: Grey

-Tombstones
-Rochester's winter sky
-Sidewalks
-The soles of my shoes
-The only mug in my house which holds nine ounces
-My turntable
-Construction sites
-Crutches
-My headphones
-The adress bar at the top of the page

15 comments:

  1. the words connect in a beautiful way that makes it sound lovely to your ears when you hear it. it has great visuals because it is strong writing. love it!

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  2. I like hwo the poem uses the color red over and over & reinforces it usin different metaphors and similes.
    Color: Blue
    1. Medittereanean Sea
    2. Ripped Slim Straight Jeans
    3. Blue Ballpoint Pen
    4. Blueberry Pie
    5. Blue Blogspot Background
    6. American Flag Stars
    7. The Sky
    8. A Bluejay
    9. ADT Security Post
    10. My Debit Card

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  3. Mariah Gonzalez

    Color: Green

    Ten items: 1.) Freshly mowed grass.
    2.) Avocado.
    3.) Lime.
    4.) Cucumber.
    5.) Spring leaf.
    6.) Envy.
    7.) Zucchini.
    8.) Green grapes.
    9.) Rain forest.
    10.) Clover.

    Response to poem: I enjoyed the imagery the author used throughout her poem as well as the way she keeps the main focus around the simple color of red, while intertwining her culture within it.

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  4. linai weatherspoon

    Color:Purple
    1.concord grapes
    2.eggplant
    3.plums
    4.purple marker
    5.grape jelly
    6.violet flower
    7.purple crayon
    8.purple car
    9.purple martin (bird)
    10.purple cabbage

    Response to the poem:The poem was very interesting when it came to descibing the different objects in red.It put different images in my head and different point of views about the color red.

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  5. Arieanna Burroughs

    color: White

    1: cold winter.
    2: white snow.
    3:fluffy clouds.
    4: sweet marshmallows.
    5:that perfect white smile.
    6: white diamond.
    7: white wedding dress.
    8: cold milk.
    9: my white Maltese bichon.
    10: white out.

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  6. Keith Gamble
    Color:yellow
    1.yellow light
    2. bannana
    3.#2 dixon pencil
    4.school bus
    5.phonebook
    6.yellow car
    7.pizza hut cheese pizza
    8.the sun
    9.constructiom sign
    10.peaches

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  7. response to the poem: I enjoyed how the author used different items to describe the color red. She used words that created images in my head which helped me to understand the poem more clear.

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  8. Kerri Greenaway
    color:Black
    1.dark
    2.cold
    3.death
    4.beautiful
    5.extraordinary
    6.sweet licorice
    7.the darkest hour
    8.my black terri-poo
    9.black hair salons
    10.unwanted

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  9. I do not know if i like this poem, it is somewhat confusing, but i like stanzas 5-13. All of the ideas connect and flow well together.

    Color: red

    1. Blood
    2. Love
    3. Hearts
    4. Valentines day
    5.4th of July
    6. red robin birds
    7. red velvet cake
    8. lasers
    9. steak (raw meat)
    10. war
    11. Fire

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  10. Ashley Lawson

    Yellow

    -bananas
    -lemons
    -sunshine
    -flowers (sunflowers, dandelions, etc.)
    -honey 
    -pollen
    -bees
    -school buses
    -phonebooks
    -corn

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  11. strange poem, even stranger is its appeal, good though
    colour: green
    1.)Links renown Tunic
    2.)Pollens common friend (grass)
    3.)Top colour of the traffic light
    4.)Half of Christmas's Glee
    5.)Flowing economy (money)
    6.)Greed's Eye shadow (green eyed monster
    7.)Deserts waterlogged Contrast (cactus)
    8.)Cholrophil (sorry wasn't creative on this one)
    9.)Boston's fabled wall (green monster)
    10.)Lepricons lappel

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  12. Color: Purple
    Royalty
    bruises
    grimace
    plum
    eggplants
    Charlie (okay, this won't count.)
    violet luster gems
    calming
    Anemone Nemorosa
    Birds of paradise

    I liked how the author generally clumped serious issues, as well as innocent objects together. She stayed with her idea and culture thoroughly, and successfully gave the reader something not only to imagine, but to think about.

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  13. Otchych, Yulyia

    Color: Silver

    Seiko watch
    Victorian forks
    Buckyballs
    Roman coins
    Warren Cup
    Wedding rings
    Tinsel
    Stars
    Samurai sword
    Pok`emon

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  14. i didn't know we had to put it here. i thought we were suppose to bring it to class. here's my:
    COLOR:Blue
    iris of a blonde
    perfect beautiful sky with fluffy clouds
    blue Bugatti
    sick in the face
    march birthstone
    robin's eggs hatching in a nest
    blue Jays free as falling leaves
    bushes of blueberries
    hot blue fire roaring to burn
    blue angels thrashing over the cities

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